Jesus, Laurel that was bloody brilliant! I'm still in awe of your writing and your descriptions. They are just mind blowing!
Matthew stood, head tilted back and to the side, his Adam’s apple bobbing once as the tendons in his neck strained. His skin gleamed with sweat, his jaw clenched as he mouthed the words to the song. The shadows of his cheekbones were prominent and Dominic could tell his eyes were tightly closed.
I'm a Dom!girl but seriously after that description, I'm having second thoughts! Guh, every single word was just gorgeous!
Matthew began to step backwards, the space before him closing up instantly, and traveled deeper into the crowd. Dominic followed, his body unconsciously moving forward in fear he’d lose sight of the brunette.
I'm still amazed by the fact that Matthew and Dominic have hardly spoken and yet there seems to be this deep, smoldering connection between them. It's so sultry and palpable that I was on the edge of my seat throughout that whole scene.
For Dominic to be entranced by Matthew is actually scary...but in a good way.
“Let me violate you.”
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!
Fucking tease, that Matthew is! I really really hope their staring competition advances further. Can't have them just staring all the time, eh?
I'm so glad to see this story back! I've missed it. And I miss Infinity too. I hope you write that soon too. Stunning update! Keep it going please!
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Date: 2011-03-22 07:42 am (UTC)Jesus, Laurel that was bloody brilliant! I'm still in awe of your writing and your descriptions. They are just mind blowing!
Matthew stood, head tilted back and to the side, his Adam’s apple bobbing once as the tendons in his neck strained. His skin gleamed with sweat, his jaw clenched as he mouthed the words to the song. The shadows of his cheekbones were prominent and Dominic could tell his eyes were tightly closed.
I'm a Dom!girl but seriously after that description, I'm having second thoughts! Guh, every single word was just gorgeous!
Matthew began to step backwards, the space before him closing up instantly, and traveled deeper into the crowd. Dominic followed, his body unconsciously moving forward in fear he’d lose sight of the brunette.
I'm still amazed by the fact that Matthew and Dominic have hardly spoken and yet there seems to be this deep, smoldering connection between them. It's so sultry and palpable that I was on the edge of my seat throughout that whole scene.
For Dominic to be entranced by Matthew is actually scary...but in a good way.
“Let me violate you.”
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!
Fucking tease, that Matthew is! I really really hope their staring competition advances further. Can't have them just staring all the time, eh?
I'm so glad to see this story back! I've missed it. And I miss Infinity too. I hope you write that soon too. Stunning update! Keep it going please!
*hugs* ♥