I really, really loved this. I think this is what I want when I'm reading porno. Sensuality, dominance, impatience, desire, intensity... and love. You've condensed them into this, perfectly.
"I'm yours, Dom. I'm yours and I love you. Oh fuck gonna come!" He clung to Dominic like a second skin, his vision blurring from the intensity and the tears.
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Date: 2011-01-15 02:34 am (UTC)I think this is what I want when I'm reading porno. Sensuality, dominance, impatience, desire, intensity... and love. You've condensed them into this, perfectly.
"I'm yours, Dom. I'm yours and I love you. Oh fuck gonna come!" He clung to Dominic like a second skin, his vision blurring from the intensity and the tears.
I especially loved this line. Just wonderful. ♥