I really, really loved this.
I think this is what I want when I'm reading porno. Sensuality, dominance, impatience, desire, intensity... and love. You've condensed them into this, perfectly.

"I'm yours, Dom. I'm yours and I love you. Oh fuck gonna come!" He clung to Dominic like a second skin, his vision blurring from the intensity and the tears.

I especially loved this line. Just wonderful. ♥