ext_64987 ([identity profile] shuralove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sunshine_173 2011-01-02 03:11 pm (UTC)

Very well written indeed :) I particularly enjoyed this line..

"Time passes as I remap the landscape of his mouth, our tongues relearning the dance they never quite forgot. His body is hot against mine and I can feel him, all of him, pressing desperately against me....." that was just lovely. <3
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