Date: 2011-01-02 02:53 pm (UTC)
Stunning. Wonderful piece, really.

It´s quite depressing too, you know? So many guys live like this Dominic, pretending, having a wife and kids when in reality they´re gay. I´m glad this one had a happy ending, and most importantly, an HONEST ending.

I swear as I step passed him that his eyes are glittering with tears.
I loved that line, so touching. Told us so much about the pain Matthew was suffering before the encounter.

His face is torn, those beautifully radiant eyes undoubtedly shining with tears. Mouth frowning and skin paler than white. Eyelashes flutter and he represses a sob. He begins to tremble and I fear that he’s about to order me to leave. I’m at a loss as to what to do. I’ve known him my whole life and yet I can only count the number of times I’ve witnessed him cry on one hand. All of them were because of me
Lovely paragraph, so sad but beautiful.

I loved the whole thing, thank you for writing it.
And I CAN´T WAIT for the next chapter of Infinity!!! <3

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