http://thekeyholder.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sunshine_173 2010-11-05 01:10 pm (UTC)

YAAAAAAAAAAAY! :D Oh my god, can this be any cuter?! <3 You're story made me so happy!

In that split-second of blinding light, Dominic looked into Matthew’s eyes, his pupils contracting quickly, the azure hue looking ghostly in the yellow-white brightness. His long and thick, black eyelashes fluttered closed for a millisecond.

^Wow, that's an intense moment right there. I loved that Matthew brought a little childish joy in Dom's life! :) He really needed some carefree hours, didn't he?

Also, I liked what Dom said about the paintings, I feel the same about showing my stories to other people.


Keep it coming, I love this story!!! :D

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